An orb of promise, hope and possibility
Descends upon an awaiting crowd.
Palms held skyward and eager;
Fingers unfurled like blooms.
The determined sure hands of believers
Jostle with the quivering fingers of the non.
A minnow in my mind
Bubbles to the top of my fish bowl memory,
Where my non-believing hands
Had once let hopes and expectation
Plummet, uncontested, to the ground
With a predictable, uninspiring thud.
But not I, determined my little man,
With the prize securely grasped in both hands.
“I caught the ball”, he declared to his departing contesters,
Before throwing it absentmindedly back to the pitcher.
“Ahhh”, I finally see.
It had been just a ball
All along.
© Strauss
3rd May 2010
Monday, May 3, 2010
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Hi there fellow Aussie..Isn't it great how the mind thinks and conceives.It been amazing to read the different analogies about this Fish ball/bowl... Maybe we are all Madhatters?Lol
ReplyDeleteI like your illusion, its thought provoking..
Bless you..
Strauss,
ReplyDeleteWell done!
the reality of success rubs away the memory of failure.
rel
ha. wonderful tale...the thud was very audible...glad he caught the ball. smiles. nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteIf it weren't for illusion... this is a finely crafted and provocative piece!
ReplyDeleteI, being the ultimate baseball fan, loved how you used the simple and exhilarating act of catching the ball in your Magpie. Well done ...
ReplyDeleteStrauss, that is very thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteI like how you included the mysterious upward hands so many of us saw! Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteA very deep meaning here I think...
ReplyDelete.....Where my non-believing hands
Had once let hopes and expectation
Plummet, uncontested, to the ground
With a predictable, uninspiring thud.
Sad to think he let hopes and expectations go!
Christine
Yes Christine, but sometimes when we removed the pressure of hope and expectation (especially others) and see things for what they really are, thwy are easier to catch;)
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your kind comments.
Dear Strauss: We often place a lot of expectations on our lives too many to accomplish. We thereby feel defeated when it comes to passing the ball or the flame torch (representing our lives) onto the next generation The baseball analogy was so much more than apt it was very appropriate. Excellent grasp on life and the ball!
ReplyDeleteNice Magpie. Love how it makes me think one way, then ends up being something altogether different from what I originally thought.
ReplyDeleteI think that happened in my son's game yesterday!
ReplyDeleteI love how children catch the possibilities, not having analyzed themselves out of belief.
Lovely poem!
It is best to believe in the orb of hope and possibilty when one is trying to throw that no-hitter. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteOh, this gets my favourite of the week. I love it when writers will delve into abstract. Such wonders and mystery await us there! But then, "It had just been a ball all along."
ReplyDeletehandsome tale,
ReplyDeleteenjoy a beautiful day!